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v1
living life for the simple things
always deny it until you've tried it,
the sunsets and the lonely beds,
mocking birds and floating heads
something tells me it's all gonna end

v2
handshakes at dawn are what we live for,
binding ties are nothing that hold
misplaced words and open fears,
a spoken silence for cemented ears
something tells me it's all gonna end

chorus
spectacularly different
yet so eager to please
unnecessary compliments
fail to put me at ease
(cos I know where we're heading)
I know where we're heading
and something keeps telling me
it's all gonna end


v3
on the run, every day counts
ultimate living for the ultimate fool,
in cheap hotels and coffee shops
those clever moves and sleepy cops
movie lifestyle only brings a hollywood end
©2004-2010 ~the-good-old-days
:iconthe-good-old-days:

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Something Tells Me It's All Gonna End

haven't been online to submit anything, I am now though, so here's something. Everything I write's starting to look the same to me... I'm gonna have to change...

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:iconewok-with-bird-flu:
everything you write is so amazing
an it's not all the same, it's brilliant
keep writing

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I might just lose my mind and rob a lace shop.
:iconthe-good-old-days:
thank you very much :)
still to me it's same-y...
I need to write about some more subjects I think...
:iconcadence92:
OMGoodnesss!!! this is insanely good man! mos deff a plus fav

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...ItS aLl To SwEet t0 lAsT....
:iconsugarbaby195:
oh man..nice! this is great!

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How great Thou art
:iconsoussan:
heh, i know how you feel exactly - i often have that impression too, that i am repeating the same things over and over, the same themes as well as the same written style...
I like that one very much though the last line seems a bit long to me. Other than that, it's really good, especially the two first verses.

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I haven't seen myself for ages...
:iconinsanity-streak:
Wow. i really love something about this poem, i think its the rythm and the general meaning overall of it, kinda seeming at peace with the fact its all going to end, and the chorus rounds it up nicely!! i think i like the last paragraph least though... didn't seem as strong as the rest... but its seriously awesome, well done!

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Buffy: Angel
Angel: Buffy
Xander: Xander
:iconchalkheart:
you have a gift... this is.. so wonderful. seriously..
just smile and keep writing. please!

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